Comments for Writing Works Wonders https://writingworkswonders.com Encouraging and Inspiring Authors! Fri, 04 Oct 2024 20:03:02 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.7.1 Comment on 10/4/24 Writing prompt – Fallen! by Marlene Mesot https://writingworkswonders.com/2024/09/01/10-4-24-writing-prompt-fallen/#comment-428 Fri, 04 Oct 2024 20:03:02 +0000 https://writingworkswonders.com/?p=4076#comment-428 The Hole Perspective

Looking up from down here I appreciate the fine dimensions of this pit I have just fallen into. The mud is cool with an earthy scent, just enough room for my width and plenty for my length, being the sleek creature that I am. I must speculate on such a clever idea to tuck a tarp under the myriad of a colorful fall leave covering. I wish I had thought of it. The walls of finely packed dirt are so smooth I wonder what effort went into such scraping and careful preparation.

But not I must stop admiring and start pondering my predicament. Even though there is light from the sky high above, I find no resources to help myself ascend to the top. A shiver of excitement ripples through me as my keen ears pick up a sound, a voice, calling my name. I bark loudly.

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Comment on 8/2/24 Writing prompt – Donuts, and more by Carol Mackey https://writingworkswonders.com/2024/06/07/8-2-24-writing-prompt-donuts-and-more/#comment-421 Sat, 08 Jun 2024 13:06:19 +0000 https://writingworkswonders.com/?p=3996#comment-421 
Defend Less
Once I knew a Dragonfly
who had a Donut for a friend.
I never ever asked them why
they were such Caring friends
it’s like it is with you and I…
there’s nothing to defend !

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Comment on 8/2/24 Writing prompt – Donuts, and more by Marlene+Mesot https://writingworkswonders.com/2024/06/07/8-2-24-writing-prompt-donuts-and-more/#comment-420 Fri, 07 Jun 2024 18:55:34 +0000 https://writingworkswonders.com/?p=3996#comment-420 Doughnuts Delight
(Octave)

Light and airy
Like dragonfly wings,
Creamy filled doughnuts
Delight brings.
A box of assorted dozen doughnuts
Shared among friends or at your workplace,
Presents you
With a caring happy face.

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Comment on 6/7/24 writing prompt, scratching at the door by Marlene Mesot https://writingworkswonders.com/2024/05/20/6-7-24-writing-prompt-scratching-at-the-door/#comment-419 Tue, 21 May 2024 18:18:12 +0000 https://writingworkswonders.com/?p=3923#comment-419 Sounds at the Door
05/17/2024

I was relaxing on my comfy couch when a barely audible sound invaded my ears shattering the silence. Then it gradually increased in frequency and intensity. As I listened, not moving, it became a scratching sound. I have no pets. Was there an animal, or something else? Was someone using a tool, a weapon to make that ominous noise? No strange smells and I couldn’t see anything with darkness outside. I rose slowly, walked to the door and peered out. I gasped seeing shadowy movement. Focusing, I realized a tree branch was scraping against the house.

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Comment on May 17, 2024 writing prompt by Marlene Mesot https://writingworkswonders.com/2024/05/03/may-17-2024-writing-prompt/#comment-418 Sat, 04 May 2024 11:57:44 +0000 https://writingworkswonders.com/?p=3893#comment-418 Food Quest

Human babytalk while she eats, I hiss to myself. Slinking cat-like to my food bowl, my green eyes widen at the empty bottom. Trilling, I wind my way between my human’s legs, brushing warmly against them. As her hands reach down, I spit and bolt. Meowing, I hop to the counter and leap unsuccessfully over dirty dishes causing a clatter to the floor. Now I’ve done it. Her favorite mug too. I wait. After she cleans up the dish demolition, I sit and eye her sandwich, then the pantry. Finally, I crunch contentedly on my food purring peacefully.

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Comment on May 3, 2024 Writing prompt everything May by Marlene+Mesot https://writingworkswonders.com/2024/05/03/may-3-2024-writing-prompt-everything-may/#comment-417 Fri, 03 May 2024 17:06:29 +0000 https://writingworkswonders.com/?p=3888#comment-417 Book Review: Mayday at Two Thousand Five Hundred by Frank Peretti
04/05/2024

Young teen jay Cooper must land a crippled plane solo in Mayday at Two Thousand Five Hundred, the Cooper Kids Adventures Book 8 by Frank Peretti. The only problem is that Jay has been temporarily blinded due to a concussion. The pilot, his uncle Rex, is unconscious in his seat and unavailable to help Jay. Fortunately, the radio still works, and Jay’s father is able to communicate with him provided he remains conscious during this tense and exciting adventure.

Available: print, ebook, read by the author on Audible.

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Comment on April 5, 2024 Writing prompt, travel, and more by Cecily Laney Nipper https://writingworkswonders.com/2024/03/01/3-15-24-writing-prompt-travel-and-more/#comment-414 Thu, 14 Mar 2024 16:24:44 +0000 https://writingworkswonders.com/?p=3766#comment-414 As a woman with impaired vision, independent travel to an event such as a conference fills me with delight. Professional networking is my priority at these seminars, but I am always most enthusiastic about exploring the community on foot. The sights, scenes, and sustenance of the locale where I am staying – Spanish and Indian food, for example, crowned my last foray. Excursion by foot was constrained on three sides, so ride share was my avenue to the world, and while this did not provide the same freedom of mind as pedestrian travel I am well pleased with my adventure.

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Comment on April 5, 2024 Writing prompt, travel, and more by Marlene Mesot https://writingworkswonders.com/2024/03/01/3-15-24-writing-prompt-travel-and-more/#comment-413 Sat, 02 Mar 2024 20:21:31 +0000 https://writingworkswonders.com/?p=3766#comment-413 Visit the Vibrant Granite State

The Granite State, New Hampshire, holds colorful and varied adventures for the travel enthusiast. Four full seasons add color and excitement to activities for each climate and holiday. Hike the White Mountains in the touristy north or explore Hampton and Rye Beaches along the Atlantic coastline.

Hillsborough NH holds a Living History event in August honoring our fourteenth President Franklin Pierce. Celebrate July Fourth at Atlas Fireworks retailer/wholesaler, Jaffrey NH, with its unique display. October showcases a pumpkin festival in Milford NH. Visit Story Land, Glen NH. Savor real maple syrup and much more.

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Comment on 3.1 Writing prompt – three words by Annie Davis https://writingworkswonders.com/2024/02/16/3-1-writing-promot/#comment-412 Tue, 20 Feb 2024 03:56:08 +0000 https://writingworkswonders.com/?p=3757#comment-412 March is a very Irish month! When the snow melts, and the bright sunshine and the green grass enter our lives, it’s like magic! When the seasons change, God’s creation prooves more than magical! While the snow storm may cover our sidewalks at night, a rainbow comes in the morning, and our sorrow turns to joy!

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Comment on 3.1 Writing prompt – three words by Marlene Mesot https://writingworkswonders.com/2024/02/16/3-1-writing-promot/#comment-411 Sat, 17 Feb 2024 17:04:59 +0000 https://writingworkswonders.com/?p=3757#comment-411 Light of the World
(Nonet)

Light illuminates our world with warmth,
Adds bright cheer to each of our days,
Causes sweet greenery growth,
Living water refresh,
Rainbows color bright,
Enhances our
Atmosphere,
Spirit,
Now.

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Comment on 2/2/24 Writing prompt, a cookie! by Gj https://writingworkswonders.com/2024/01/19/2-2-20-for-writing-prompt-a-cookie/#comment-410 Sat, 17 Feb 2024 03:17:16 +0000 https://writingworkswonders.com/?p=3650#comment-410 Alice and Leela met at the Kyle Cookie Company each morning before work. They usually chose Oatmeal or Snicker Doodle Cookies. They bought two Black and White cookies. Folding the cookie in half, each enjoyed chocolate and vanilla ecstasy.

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Comment on 1/19/24 Writing prompt by Marlene Mesot https://writingworkswonders.com/2024/01/06/1-19-writing-prompt/#comment-409 Fri, 26 Jan 2024 18:57:23 +0000 https://writingworkswonders.com/?p=3646#comment-409 The Mighty Mastiff

Is it astronomical to wonder how a large ancient breed dog could be perpetuated through the centuries to remain today? The Old English mastiff, from which other breeds derived, such as the Saint Bernard, Great Dane, and others have been used as guards and protectors since medieval times. Their size, bulk and lose skin make them perfect protectors. They are alert, smart and quick to warn when strangers approach, yet they are dosile by nature, loving and eager to please their family members. They are truly gentle giants.

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Comment on Sept 15 . Three words. by Gj https://writingworkswonders.com/2023/08/18/sept-15-three-words/#comment-408 Sat, 20 Jan 2024 16:51:21 +0000 https://writingworkswonders.com/?p=3559#comment-408 My heart soars when I have a Serendipity.

moment and find new Squash varieties to try.

Hubbard and kabocha lift my spirit after a difficult week.

Spaghetti squash is a Scally wag with each strand when it doesn’t form long noodles.

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Comment on 1/19/24 Writing prompt by Gj https://writingworkswonders.com/2024/01/06/1-19-writing-prompt/#comment-407 Sat, 20 Jan 2024 16:44:55 +0000 https://writingworkswonders.com/?p=3646#comment-407 Jazz and her cat Amos love to dance. The more they do the stomp they Perpetuate

their love for life. My heart opens in astronomical

portions as I watch from my front yard.

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Comment on 2/2/24 Writing prompt, a cookie! by Marlene Mesot https://writingworkswonders.com/2024/01/19/2-2-20-for-writing-prompt-a-cookie/#comment-406 Sat, 20 Jan 2024 01:05:52 +0000 https://writingworkswonders.com/?p=3650#comment-406 Black and White Attraction

The adage that opposites attract is supported by the phenomenon of the black and white cookie. The smooth creamy flavor of vanilla could be symbolized by airy white angel food, while the heavier black chocolate represented by devil’s fool. Together they complement each other perfectly like peanut butter and jelly.

In my childhood neighborhood there was a black and white sidewalk. The sidewalk was the rougher white cement, while the driveways and area next to the street which would have been grass or dirt was the smoother black tar, a complementary contrast taking opposite roles.

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Comment on 1/5/24 Writing prompt two options! by Marlene Mesot https://writingworkswonders.com/2023/12/15/1-5-24-writing-prompt-two-options/#comment-405 Thu, 21 Dec 2023 20:58:39 +0000 https://writingworkswonders.com/?p=3625#comment-405 Winter
(Sestina Excerpt)

Now clean, fluffy and white new snow,
pristine, perfect, blanket, brilliant,
soon to become dirty as coal,
with the drudgery of winter.
Yet snow glistens, cheery, festive,
brightening festive holidays.

Helping others keeps us festive.
No one wants dirty lump of coal.
Present yourself kindly, brilliant,
in the spirit of holidays.
Remember the blanket of snow,
falls on friend and foe in winter.

Season’s shortest days in winter,
will not dampen spirits festive,
even though cold, heavy with snow.
Persevere like hard lumps of coal.
Every day some holidays.
Keep alive your spirits brilliant.

Memorable holidays snow.

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Comment on 12/1/23 writing prompt = three words by CHERYL MCNEIL FISHER https://writingworkswonders.com/2023/11/17/12-1-23-writing-prompt-three-words/#comment-404 Wed, 13 Dec 2023 22:28:22 +0000 https://writingworkswonders.com/?p=3617#comment-404 “This is so exciting! Our first cruise. Look at the size of the ship. It’s enormous..”
We have had blue skies and sun for five days. On the sixth day, around noon, the light began to fade, and the ripples in the water
became small waves.
Then, within one hour, the waves began to rock the ship.

The Captain ordered everyone to go below deck. We heard a crash, the lights went out, and the darkness encompassed us.

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Comment on 12/1/23 writing prompt = three words by Marlene Mesot https://writingworkswonders.com/2023/11/17/12-1-23-writing-prompt-three-words/#comment-403 Fri, 08 Dec 2023 02:31:00 +0000 https://writingworkswonders.com/?p=3617#comment-403 Mister Purry
(Ballad)

He can be steel gray as a ship’s hull,
Or black as a shadow at night.
Mister Purry can be any creature of imagination,
Hiding from the truth of light.

He remains steadily,
In the solitary solace of your soul
Which is where he chooses to be.
He can comfort and console.

But Mr. Purry can be wayward,
Choosing to egg on the villain.
Encouraging you toward evil deeds,
If only you are willin’.

Is Mister Purry friend or foe?
You may start to wonder.
Good or evil is your choice,
As toward consequences you plunder.

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Comment on 11/17/23 writing prompt, walking through the leaves by Saby V. https://writingworkswonders.com/2023/11/08/11-17-23-writing-prompt-walking-through-the-leaves/#comment-402 Fri, 17 Nov 2023 17:59:16 +0000 https://writingworkswonders.com/?p=3609#comment-402 A group of children navigates through a leaf-strewn path in a park, using canes to safely maneuver past low branches. Tommy, the eldest at twelve, halts as rustling sounds emerge nearby. He discovers a toddler’s scooter obstructing their way and, further along, a small shoe that belonged to a young girl. The girls, Amy and Nellie, likely aged around nine or ten, and the youngest, Toby at seven, accompany him. This unsettling discovery hints at a mysterious situation, leaving the children surprised and concerned about what might have occurred in the park.

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Comment on 11/17/23 writing prompt, walking through the leaves by Trish Laube https://writingworkswonders.com/2023/11/08/11-17-23-writing-prompt-walking-through-the-leaves/#comment-401 Thu, 16 Nov 2023 03:38:07 +0000 https://writingworkswonders.com/?p=3609#comment-401 Mabel leaves Harrys nuts. Oops I mean. Maple leaves, Hickory nuts. I enjoy healing laughs after I realize mistakes as I write due to my loss of sight. Through our mistakes we can learn to find the humor and positive attitude it takes to move beyond mishaps and mistakes.Here we go walking through the leaves that Mabel our maple tree releases to the ground and becomes a child’s playground as they jump and play around.. Then out of the funny mistake a tree named. Harry’s hickory nuts which papa found on the ground.Let’s ho and roast and make hickory butter for toast. Trish Laube

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Comment on 11/17/23 writing prompt, walking through the leaves by Marlene Mesot https://writingworkswonders.com/2023/11/08/11-17-23-writing-prompt-walking-through-the-leaves/#comment-400 Tue, 14 Nov 2023 23:29:07 +0000 https://writingworkswonders.com/?p=3609#comment-400 Underneath the Leaves

As they walked through the leaves on the earthy sidewalk, kicking them up showering bright autumn colors around, the twins suddenly stopped as a dark area was revealed up ahead.

Brother Jim exclaimed, “Careful.”

Sister Jeffie blinked and stared.

Jim stooped to brush away debris to reveal a fallen limb across their path. Bent forward with his ear near the bark Jim looked up. “Hear that…hissing?”

Jeffie shook her head.

In a flurry of motion leaves rustled and flew as a small dark blur scurried out from under darting off.

They ran after the small dark streak.

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Comment on 11/3/23 writing prompt. Cold, windy, warm, cozy by Marlene Mesot https://writingworkswonders.com/2023/10/31/11-3-23-writing-prompt-cold-windy-warm-cozy/#comment-399 Fri, 03 Nov 2023 00:57:54 +0000 https://writingworkswonders.com/?p=3602#comment-399 Oppositions

The icy cold windy winter bite
Pervades outside the house wintery nights,
But fireplace holds the warmth inside bright
Snuggly warm, cozy, with no fright.

Keep comfort and joy in your heart near
As you ponder life’s choices so dear.
Hold onto your thoughts and keep them clear.
Bad like ice, good like toasty. Let’s cheer.

Let that ice melt now from your old soul.
Better than barb, biting, break that mold.

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Comment on October 20, 20 23–3 words by Marlene Mesot https://writingworkswonders.com/2023/10/19/october-20-20-23-3-words/#comment-398 Thu, 19 Oct 2023 20:35:31 +0000 https://writingworkswonders.com/?p=3594#comment-398 Behind the Shower Curtain
(Loud)
10/14/2023

Behind the shower curtain, appears to be,
A phenomenon shrouded in mystery.
Hear hollow thunks like horse hoof beats,
Sometimes even little squeaks.

Undefinable shapes sprout and disappear, swish, thud.
Are ghosts lurking in the tall hot tub?
No sound of splish-splash–
Glimpse plenty of dash,

As flashes of different colored fur streak by,
Curious, ambitious, rambunction high.
Nay, look, catch a peak,
Of kittens jumping at play not unique.

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Comment on October six, 2023 coffee, tea, and…. by Marlene Mesot https://writingworkswonders.com/2023/09/29/october-six-2023-coffee-tea-and/#comment-397 Thu, 05 Oct 2023 23:31:35 +0000 https://writingworkswonders.com/?p=3587#comment-397 Satisfying Read
(Tercet)

Coffee or tea
And fine mystery,
What a wonderful combination.

Nurse your strong brew
As you ferret out clues,
To appease your machinations.

Settle at last
With your book to repass,
While you ponder the story’s fascination.

Take a warm sip,
While paging your trip,
Through wonder and imagination,

Elbow to bend,
Till satisfying end,
Feed to anticipation.

Another cup will do
For book number two,
To increase your satisfaction.

Take warm refreshing sips,
Toast with your drink to your lips,
And begin the pagination.

Whether mystery or thriller,
Definitely a chiller,
There’s no other substitution.

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Comment on September 29 – Sun and air. by Marlene Mesot https://writingworkswonders.com/2023/09/15/september-29-sun-and-air/#comment-396 Thu, 28 Sep 2023 12:58:53 +0000 https://writingworkswonders.com/?p=3577#comment-396 Life Giving Sources

Sunlight warms by day,
Shining heat and light,
Its rays reach across,
To help planet earth.

Air feels light and free,
Filtering our breath,
Unseen comfort felt,
Balancing fresh life.

Moonlight evening pale,
Does not light the path,
No warmth does it send,
As it guards the night.

Faith flows like the wind,
Subtle unseen trust,
Stepping to unknown,
Learning as it grows.

Cornerstone of life,
Light of all the world,
Spirit wind foretells,
If we seek the Son.

Not all views the same.
Difference abounds.
Existence is here.
Will the sun burn out?

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Comment on Sept 15 . Three words. by Cheryl McNeil Fisher https://writingworkswonders.com/2023/08/18/sept-15-three-words/#comment-395 Fri, 15 Sep 2023 00:32:55 +0000 https://writingworkswonders.com/?p=3559#comment-395 What is Serendipity??

My phone rings. “Mom, I had an accident on my ATV.
I’m OK, but they want to keep me overnight in the trauma unit.”
My sister was also in the trauma unit, recovering from a brain aneurysm.

After we hung up, he asked the nurse if he could see his aunt before he settled in bed.
“Who’s your aunt?”
He said her name, and the staff looked at him strangely.
Heads turned when they heard,
“That’s me. Zack I’m over here.”
A few steps across the hall from his room, and there she was.
He leaned down to hug her gently With great big smiles on both their faces.
They laughed and joked and shed some tears.
The room glowed with love and memories.
It was the last time they would visit on this earthly plane
That is Serendipity.

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Comment on Sept 15 . Three words. by Marlene Mesot https://writingworkswonders.com/2023/08/18/sept-15-three-words/#comment-392 Sun, 20 Aug 2023 17:03:21 +0000 https://writingworkswonders.com/?p=3559#comment-392 Romans 8:28 NASB

And we know that God causes all things to work together for good to those who love God, to those who are called according to His purpose.

According to this quote, is God a scallywag who manipulates serendipity to His advantage? Certainly not. Does He squash hopes and kill the spirit by controlling destiny? Never.

In Romans 12:2 we are told: And do not be conformed to this world, but be transformed by the renewing of your mind, so that you may prove what the will of God is, that which is good and acceptable and perfect.

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Comment on August 4. Box! by Cheryl McNeil Fisher https://writingworkswonders.com/2023/07/21/august-4-box/#comment-388 Wed, 09 Aug 2023 14:14:17 +0000 https://writingworkswonders.com/?p=3540#comment-388 Kisses for Cindy

Cindy pulled an oversized shoe box from under the bed. To her surprise, she found the VHS camcorder that captured so many precious memories.

She plugged it in, sat crossed-legged on the floor, and hit play. Tears welled up in her eyes. It was a video of Kari, wearing a fun hat and sunglasses, doing a selfie before selfies were even a thing.

With the camera pointed at the mirror, she said, “This is for you, Mom.” The song “Butterfly Kisses” filled the room.

And with a radiant smile, Kari’s voice blended perfectly, surrounding Cindy with love.

She noted the date at the bottom of the video, three days before the tragic accident that took Kari from us.

The music ended. Kari removed her sunglasses and came closer to say, “I love you, Mom.”

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Comment on Aug 18. Unfamiliar. by Marlene Mesot https://writingworkswonders.com/2023/08/04/aug-18-unfamiliar/#comment-387 Mon, 07 Aug 2023 20:52:29 +0000 https://writingworkswonders.com/?p=3548#comment-387 Unfamiliar Drive

The sound of a boom shouldn’t have surprised me because I was driving with headlights on during early afternoon due to the blanket of gray overhead, growing darker by the minute. Glancing around this narrow road, the Kancamagus Highway, twisting through the White Mountains, home territory, but nothing seemed familiar.

I sent a worried glance toward my wife in the passenger seat, who was dozing peacefully. I sighed heavily as the inevitable rain began to chatter on the SUV’s roof. Anxiety rose.

As lightning flashed, scenery began to take on a clarity of focus. Relief lightened my burden.

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Comment on August 4. Box! by Marlene Mesot https://writingworkswonders.com/2023/07/21/august-4-box/#comment-381 Sun, 23 Jul 2023 15:28:26 +0000 https://writingworkswonders.com/?p=3540#comment-381 First two prompts.

#1 I Am a Part of You
(Quatrain)
07/21/2023

I am your silhouette facing you atop the water,
Rippling out in no particular order.
I abide in the decisions you make,
Affecting your life, good or bad course it will take.

I am your shadow to be found,
Always with you atop the ground.
When sun is high, but spirits are not, I become small.
When confidence grows I become tall.

I am in the mirror your reflection,
Your conscience inside for introspection.
I know your thoughts, your joys, your doubts,
But I know not how your life will turn out.

#2 I Wish
(Couplet)
07/21/2023

I wish to avoid stress at all cost,
But sometimes we must accept loss.

I wish family and friends never went away,
That our animals with us could always stay.

I wish we could have snow all year round.
And to preserve out planet’s ground.

I wish fall foliage would always be there,
And I’d like to see myriads of colors everywhere.

I wish I knew for what to wish,
For life is more than food in a dish.

I wish all humans could together get along,
And I wish we all believed in our Creator’s song.

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